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PostSubject: Aiko Shimane   Fri May 29, 2015 12:00 am

[size=13][color=#3399FF][b]|~ Gen. Information ~|[/b][/color][/size]
   [b]Aliases / Names: Aiko Shimane[/b]

   [b]Age: 11 | Birthplace:Cherrygrove city, Johto | Gender: Female[/b]

   [b]Trainer Rank: Pokemon Trainer[/b]

   [size=13][color=#3399FF][b]|~ Characterization ~|[/b][/color][/size]
   [b] Appearance: [/b]
She has short caramel hair with dark brown eyes. She likes wearing an orange hoodie with a light blue t-shirt underneath with jeans and black sneakers. She also wears a key-shaped necklace. She is about 4'8" tall and

   [b] Personality: [/b]
Aiko is a confident and optimistic girl who especially likes pokemon whos appearances are cutesy or very pretty to look at. She loves making friends with nearly everyone she meets. What she thinks is most important when training pokemon is how much the pokemon trust and love their trainer, rather then just focusing on making their base stats stronger. Sometimes, if nearby a river or some other body of water, she might sit at the edge with her pokemon and just sit in the calming quietness, listening to the rest of the world pass by.

   [b]Battle Style:[/b]
Her strategy for battle is to have each of her pokemon have different typed moves so that she may use type advantages against her opponents. She also usually prefers her pokemon to not have stat changing moves such as leer.

   [b] Past Experience / History [/b]
She was born and raised in Cherrygrove city. When she was little, she liked heading to the nearby beach or into the forests to explore and watch the wild pokemon in the area. While she was there, she saw Chikorita running from Porfessor Elm, who had called to her for help. Her mother didn't want her leave the house until she was eleven because of the news talking about shady men and women (team rocket) running around.
She doesn't like ghost type pokemon that much, mostly because when she goes wandering, her mother sends her haunter to watch her in case anything happens. She would be willing to do almost anything to get her hands on some star pieces to put together, wanting to have a star of her own for good luck. She dreams of one day traveling to the hoenn region after beating the pokemon league to see what the pokemon contests are like, maybe even participate in them.

   [size=13][color=#3399FF][b] |~ Inventory ~| [/b][/color][/size]
   [b] Badges: [/b]
   ~Johto~

   [b] Money: [/b] $6,200
   [b] Items: [/b] 05x Pokeballs

   [size=13][color=#3399FF][b] |~ Pokemon ~| [/b][/color][/size]
   [b] Species: [/b] Chikorita
   [b] Nickname: [/b] Sungleam
   [b] Gender: [/b] Female
   [b] Level: [/b] 6
   [b] Experience: [/b] 0
   [b] Ability: [/b] Overgrow
   [b] Personality: [/b] A Naive pokemon that likes to run
   [b] Moves: [/b]
-Tackle
-Razor Leaf
-Sunny Day

( Tried to fix the things for bolding and what not but it doesn't seem to work for me :/ )


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PostSubject: Re: Aiko Shimane   Fri May 29, 2015 6:00 am

Idk if this is actually complete bc the coding is screwed up, but that needs fixing and some of the bullet points left in need erasing.

The personality and history are rather plain and flat right now. What sets this girl apart from the rest? What are her weaknesses, fears and flaws? Any aspirations aside from becoming stronger/gaining Pokemon trust? What has influenced her? What was life like at home and outside of it? Where did she get Chikorita? Any reason she waited until eleven to leave home? Your character is a person and so they should be three dimensional. Plain is fine, but there should be a few things that make them stand out and tick. Also in terms of appearance, consider things like height, weight, body type and if she has anything like freckles, larger/smaller features, outstanding birth marks, skin tone, etc.

Even if the app wasn't finished, hopefully this gives you something extra to work with.
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PostSubject: Re: Aiko Shimane   Sat May 30, 2015 6:29 pm

It does help, thank you, it's just hard to think of things off the top of my head sometimes! I'll just edit it a bit if that's okay-- Cat
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